From 20 feet away, I saw her looking out her front window, as usual, with folded arms resting on the sill and cradling her head.
I exhaled. Ella was asleep, so I moved stealthily. “Good morning“, I heard as soon as I was within her line of vision.
“Good morning Miss Ella,” I replied muttering under my breath, “you have inbuilt motion sensors?”
“What?” she asked.
“I was saying, ‘everyone is fine at home, thank you.” I’d planned to add that to my greeting since she normally asked about my family and while I was replying, she would search for another topic to lengthen our conversation.
I quickened my pace hoping to be out of earshot before her 89-year old brain could react but she was fast.
“Not going to church this morning? I will tell the priest you are off to do the devil’s business,” she chuckled.
“No service this morning,” I replied. Time was ticking on my full schedule while her only chore was trapping passers-by into long conversations but I couldn’t ignore a lonely old lady dressed in her Sunday best on Tuesday.
“Senility isn’t wrecking my brain; it’s loneliness,” she said “old age is a bitch. Eat, drink, look out this window; that’s who I’ve become. No one to chat with, unless someone like you pass by and spare a minute with an old bird.”
My head dropped in shame. I left an hour later, my soul at peace but my schedule wrecked and my heart broken from looking deep inside old age.
She’d spoken with pride about being able, as a single mother, to pay her children’s fare so they could migrate to jobs in London during the 1950’s. “They send me money now but I need to feel loved,” she’d said, her eyes filled with tears.
“Was I right to let them go? ”
P.S. I wrote this partially true story for the trifecta which challenged writers to produce a story of between 33 and 333 words using the word ‘bitch’ defined as “something that is extremely difficult, objectionable, or unpleasant”.
Should I have cut my story at three paragraphs before the end and add more words conveying feeling earlier? Or would that be over done? Please tell me?